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A poem
Posted On 02/16/2025 13:52:24 by nightfall

I thought I would repost this poem from the poetry group that used to be.

Drifting


Drifting in this zone

Feeling so alone

My searching the clue

Looking everywhere for you

 

In the morning and night

Beyond the sight

What is it that's real

I don't know how to feel

 

Lost is what's dear

World quite unclear

Clouded over no sun

I'm coming really undone

 

Drifting down the road

On automatic mode

If only this way

Gave me just one more day

 

By Greg 11/24/18

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02/24/2025 13:16:43

Thanks Wanda. Each of us grieve in our own way. I wrote this not long after the passing of my wife. I am in a good place now and she lives forever in my heart.


Wanda-Marie wrote:

I just now saw this and wanted to thank you for sharing it. We never know what others are going through or how the loss of a loved one will affect us. Recently I have lost a few friends and its hard to get past it , nothing like losing a mate I am sure but the pain is there...You are a good friend to all and we all are here for each other...many hugs being sent your way my dear friend!



02/24/2025 08:28:26

I just now saw this and wanted to thank you for sharing it. We never know what others are going through or how the loss of a loved one will affect us. Recently I have lost a few friends and its hard to get past it , nothing like losing a mate I am sure but the pain is there...You are a good friend to all and we all are here for each other...many hugs being sent your way my dear friend!



02/19/2025 06:49:50

Thank you. I am in a good place now. I wrote this a few weeks after the passing of my wife. You can imagine I was pretty lost at that time. I am staying busy and being with friends and family makes everything wonderful.


JustDeb wrote:

I hope you're staying busy Greg, that helps with the loneliness...get a part time job, or volunteer somewhere.. when I'm really down, and can't get myself back to being happy, I go help others... in the mean time, heres....



02/18/2025 17:28:44

I hope you're staying busy Greg, that helps with the loneliness...get a part time job, or volunteer somewhere.. when I'm really down, and can't get myself back to being happy, I go help others... in the mean time, heres....



02/18/2025 05:06:06

Thank you. You are so right. The numbness first then the loss. It's a long process to heal.


Mistyrose wrote:

I completely understand how you feel. The numbness first then the loss. Your poem tells it all.



02/17/2025 08:27:18

I completely understand how you feel. The numbness first then the loss. Your poem tells it all.



02/17/2025 04:49:37

Thank you. One of the hardest things to deal with is the loss of those we love.


EunHye wrote:

Beautiful poem Greg,  It's hard to find someone  you loved been passed away , the pain and sorrow cant bear to hold . 



02/17/2025 04:47:58

Thank you. I thought it would be a good thing to repost it so everyone could see it too. So many of us have been through a lot the past few years.


Altara3 wrote:

Very nice!  The feelings come out clearly.  I'm glad you posted it so everyone can see it. 



02/17/2025 04:43:15

Thank you. It took me a year to get through the grief after the loss of my wife. Between friends and family and seeing a grief counselor shortly after I wrote this. Always in my heart.


momtocam wrote:

Beautiful words..I'm listening to a vlog now on grief. The many kinds of grief. There are many losses in life. It's OK to talk about the loss as that helps us release built up feelings. Though we know the (person we were before the loss) is gone. Life does go on, so we must give it our All while we are here. And to be reminded too of the happy times that were a part of our life. Those are memories, and no one can take them away.



02/16/2025 22:04:42

Beautiful poem Greg,  It's hard to find someone  you loved been passed away , the pain and sorrow cant bear to hold . 



02/16/2025 21:24:06

Very nice!  The feelings come out clearly.  I'm glad you posted it so everyone can see it. 



02/16/2025 19:26:36

Beautiful words..I'm listening to a vlog now on grief. The many kinds of grief. There are many losses in life. It's OK to talk about the loss as that helps us release built up feelings. Though we know the (person we were before the loss) is gone. Life does go on, so we must give it our All while we are here. And to be reminded too of the happy times that were a part of our life. Those are memories, and no one can take them away.





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